These are the reflections of a Secular Franciscan. I look not only at my own spiritual journey, but also at issues of life, economic and social justice, morality, the arts, and more through the lens of Franciscan Spirituality.
Wednesday, July 30, 2014
That novel I've been working on forever
I glanced at the novel I'd been working on forever (it seems).
It was not good.
Actually, it was disheartening .
The concept is fine. Some of the action sequences work well, as do some of the sections of dialogue. But parts of the story are dated - not surprising because I started it so long ago. The transitions and descriptive details are often weak. It's too preachy - dwelling too much on the ideas and not developed as a story. Sort of like those bad but sincere Christian movies.
It may still see the light of day, but boy, would it need work. Perhaps I need to take it to a workshop for guidance.
I've had far more success with poetry and plays. Maybe those are what I need to focus more on.
I certainly seem to have the attention span for shorter works; I get bored when dealing with long pieces or sustained efforts. Perhaps that's one reason why I was successful as a journalist.
Pax et bonum
I read tons -- as you know. I am not an editor, but I am not afraid to offer comments, if you are seeking them (and could handle them).
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